2011/05/06

Comments on friends' compositions

Allen         : Most of the melody use quarter note, should make some variations.
Calista       : It's good but I think she has to add some notes to the blank bars.
Cindy Feb : There were too many blank bars in the song. She should add some notes.
Cindy Fel  : Really good composition.
Daniel       : Kind of too simple.
Ghiffari      : The last note needs to be longer, probably a half note.
Ivan          : Good, but he should expand the range of the notes that he used.
Jacklin      : Really good composition, it created fun atmosphere
Janice       : Good composition.
Jesslyn      : Good composition and articulation, but need to make the tempo slower.
Johan        : Not many variations, but it's okay.
Karina       : Really good composition, but it's kind of hard to play.
Mage        : Really good composition, but need to make the tempo faster.
Melicia      : Really good composition, but needs more practice because it's kind of hard
Michelle    : The ending is too short.
Olivia        : Really good composition.
Sarah        : Really good composition.
Tae Mi Yang : Really good composition.
Tatiana      : The melody is not connected ( the flow ).
Ynigo        : - ( Has not been submitted )
Yoshiko    : Need to change the title of the composition.
Yuliana      : Good composition.

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